Writing: Power outage

Hello,

Today I am going to show you my writing. My writing is about when the power goes off. Miss Leonard gave us a sentence to start with and then she gave us words that we had to add in. WE also had to use our six senses. The word that's colored blue ish green that is the words that we had to include. The sentences that are colored that is the sentences were the six senses are.

W.A.L.T

• Use my six senses to describe, characters, places, feelings etc. 
• Build a strong picture in our readers head
• Use strong ideas when writing.

Here it is.....

Power outage 

One night I was chilling on my couch eating Doritos I could taste the amazing flavor of the chips it was thai sweet chilli, I was so happy because Thai sweet chili is my favorite flavor. I was with my dad watching our favorite TV show. My mom was in the kitchen preparing dinner and I could smell the amazing food she made, Then ‘I could hear the thunder, booming in the sky. Suddenly the lights went out and the room went pitch black. I was hesitant to move so I stayed there for a little while. I felt so scared of the dark, I was so happy that my parents didn’t have work tonight. I could feel my dad holding my hand so tight.

 I wanted to go to the basement to get a flashlight but I was forbidden from my parents. 30 minutes later I saw a light coming from the window, so I looked outside and my neighbor was covered in Christmas lights. In my mind I was like how is the lights working when there is no power and it’s raining hard. I watched my neighbor for a little while. He started dancing and I thought it was fascinating to watch. My parents were trying to talk to me but I was so unfocused because I was still watching my neighbor. Then the lights on the street came on and the storm stopped and everyone’s house was lighting up it was so cool to watch.

• Chilling
• Forbidden
• Hesitant
• Unfocused 
• Fascinating 

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