Easttle writing

Kia ora, 

Today I am going to show you my easttle writing. My easttle writing is a prompt. The prompt is a water playground. Here it is...

W.A.L.T

• Be fluent writers
• Write about ourselves and quickly organise our writing.

THE WATER PLAYGROUND

One hot day I was so hot I thought that I was gonna burn, so I asked my mother if she could take us to the water playground in town but she said no but I got on my knees and begged her. 

After begging her she finally said yes. She said “If you want to go to the water playground you better tell your cousins and your brother to pack their clothes for after swimming”. I said ok, I called out to my cousins and my brother to get up and pack some clothes. I went into my room and got my bag and just grabbed some clothes out of my closet and just started throwing it into my bag.  

Then we got into the car and drove to the water playground. The water playground that we were going to was a new playground. It takes 3 hours to get there. Once we got there were lots of people. My cousins said at the same time “ Can we go, can we go now please, pretty please”. Then my mum said “OK but be careful and no fighting”. We all got off and started running. 

When we reached the water playground we started playing around with new people on the slides and going under umbrellas that has water coming from the top. My cousin said to me “I’m having so much fun, thanks for asking your mum to bring us here”. 2 hours later my mum said “let’s go home now, but first get changed then we go home. Then we went home and ate McDonald.

THE END

Thank you so much, please comment and tell me if it doesn't make sense to you. Have you ever written a prompt before? BYE!!!