Today I am going to show you my writing. We are learning to Be fluent writers and Write about ourselves and quickly organise our writing. Here is my writing......
Writing prompt
Strong words that you must include:
- Grasping
- Tumbling
- Creaking
- Sniffling
“No, no, no!” I was sliding back into the dream. I was screaming because I was going into a bad dream with my brother. Once we were fully in the dream we were in a haunted and spooky house.
We walked in the house and the floor was creaking right as we touched the floor with our feet. As we were walking, I kept hearing scary noises like if someone was tumbling on the floor.
Then we were hungry and we looked for food in the cupboard and there was only one chip packet And I grabbed it and smelt it, then my brother said you are give me some and I said no then he started chasing me then I decided to give him some by the time I stopped I was grasping.
After that we decided to look around and we went into a room and there were lots of scary dolls and right when I looked at the scariest one I ran into the corner and started Sniffling. I decided to slap my face, When I slapped it I woke up.
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