writing: week 5

Hello,

Today I am going to show you what I have done for week 5. For week 5 our teacher has given us a task to see what we would prefer. Here is my task.

Week 5

Compare and Contrast

otherwise, Even though

Compare: 

Likewise, As well as, Either, Similarly, In the same way

Compare and contrast the two styles of footwear. Start with this sentence and finish the other two. Add your own compare and contrast sentences.

Introduction:  Today we are looking at a pair of sneakers and a pair of scuffs.

Compare: The sneakers are shoes. Similarly, The scuffs are shoes too.

Contrast: Instead of having covered feet like the sneakers, You could wear scuffs.

Conclusion: I think that the scuffs is the better choice because your feet get air and if your feet are cold just wear socks. 

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Netiquette poster

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Today I am going to be showing you my Netiquette poster. 

My poster is about how to be Netiquette and what is Netiquette. Here it is.

Thank you so much hope you learned something new. Please comment and give me feed back. 

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Reading: De-Extinction

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Today for reading my group and I made a video about 
De-Extinction.

 We have been learning about species (Animal). We are learning to look for information in a text. I have made a video showing my information about the species. Here is a link to my video.

Link to my video

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Mahalo!!!!

(Thank you) 

Weekly word: Sceptical

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welcome back to my blog. Today I'm going to be sharing with you my weekly works. this is my second weekly word today. Here it is.

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Weekly word: Content

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Today I am going to show you my weekly word. I haven't been blogging that much but I will try and post more of my weekly words and writing. Here is my weekly word.

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Hotspot writing

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Today I am going to share with you my hotspot writing. I have written a paragraph. This is what we have been writing. Here is my brain storm and my paragraph.

• I am doing an 800 meter race on a running track

I waited at the starting line to do an  800 meter run

• A man in a highlight jacket moved us around.

The man in a highlight jacket saw that I was taller than someone so he moved me.

• The sound of a gun fire 
• I bolted from the starting line like the flash.
• People cheering
• people’s feet behind me - screeching on the ground 
• The commentator talking on speaker
• My heart beating really fast
• A man in a highlight jacket moves us around.
• People in the crowd walking around

I was getting ready to run and all of a sudden a man in a high-vis jacket moved me to someone my height. And once everything was done the man in the high-vis jacket fired his gun. When he used the gun we started sprinting. Once we were in the middle I started to get slow but I ran and I ran and got in front of 3 kids. Then I thought I was almost there but it was so long my legs were numb. But when I almost stopped I saw the finish line so I ran faster but this boy was beating me but I ran faster and faster and I got in front of him and I ran right into the ribbon.

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De-Extinction video

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Today I am going to be showing you my video that I made about De-Extinction. In my video there are fact about species (animals). Here it is. Sorry my video is not working but here is a photo and the link to my video.

My video

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Weekly word: Cheeky

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Today I am going to show you my weekly word. Today's word is cheeky you've probably already saw it in my title. Here it is.

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Topic: Dance

Hello everyone,

Last week for Topic we have been looking at dance and picking dances that we like and what we want to try and learn. So we had to do some research. Here are 4 dance styles that I like and my poster.

Dance style: 1

Dance style: 2

Dance style: 3

Dance style: 4

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Writing Blog

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Today I am going to show my work. What we are learning to do for writing is changing a telling sentence into a showing sentence by turning (I) into a (the).  So we had a prompt, the prompt was like this picture of the sea, clouds and lightning. So any way I will be showing you my work. Here it is...  

Find five things related to the senses to describe in this image. Start each one with ‘The…’

1.The lightning can hurt people.

2. The lightning struck's the water and makes big waves.

3.The lightning struck's the power line and makes is sparks

4. The weird smell of some sort of burning smell made me dizzy.

5. The loud and terrifying sound of lightning made me really scared.

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Hotspot Writing: Show Not Tell

Malo E lelei,

Today I have been learning to show and describe and to not tell.

Miss D has put a short sentence and we have to make a paragraph or a sentence and show how the person is feeling without putting the word that the person is feeling so we have to describe the person and use different words to describe. Here is my table that I worked on.

Thank you so much for reading hope u enjoyed and don't instead show and describe tell if you are writing a story. 

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