Hotspot writing

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Today I am going to share with you my hotspot writing. I have written a paragraph. This is what we have been writing. Here is my brain storm and my paragraph.

• I am doing an 800 meter race on a running track

I waited at the starting line to do an  800 meter run

• A man in a highlight jacket moved us around.

The man in a highlight jacket saw that I was taller than someone so he moved me.

• The sound of a gun fire 
• I bolted from the starting line like the flash.
• People cheering
• people’s feet behind me - screeching on the ground 
• The commentator talking on speaker
• My heart beating really fast
• A man in a highlight jacket moves us around.
• People in the crowd walking around

I was getting ready to run and all of a sudden a man in a high-vis jacket moved me to someone my height. And once everything was done the man in the high-vis jacket fired his gun. When he used the gun we started sprinting. Once we were in the middle I started to get slow but I ran and I ran and got in front of 3 kids. Then I thought I was almost there but it was so long my legs were numb. But when I almost stopped I saw the finish line so I ran faster but this boy was beating me but I ran faster and faster and I got in front of him and I ran right into the ribbon.

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