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Friday, 2 August 2019

Hotspot Writing: Show Not Tell

Malo E lelei,

Today I have been learning to show and describe and to not tell.
Miss D has put a short sentence and we have to make a paragraph or a sentence and show how the person is feeling without putting the word that the person is feeling so we have to describe the person and use different words to describe. Here is my table that I worked on.




Thank you so much for reading hope u enjoyed and don't instead show and describe tell if you are writing a story. 


Bye

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