Today I am going to be showing you my Hotspot writing. For this writing our teacher has showed us a website where you have to write for 5 minutes and if you stop for too long it will say you failed.
There are some sentences that My teacher have given me. They are highlighted.
W.A.L.T
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Here is my writing...
As he opened the car door, there was a loud bang so he decided to go and look so see what was happening. When he got there he said “OH MY GOODNESS!! "Those people are breaking into the neighbours house”. He called the police. 10 minutes later the police arrived and went to look inside the man’s neighbours house. When the police finished they came outside. They told the man that the people have escaped out the back door. The man said “sorry I couldn't do anything about it”. He went inside his neighbours house and saw that everything was gone. He decided to go back into his house to see if they broke into his house luckily nothing was taken. After all that happened he got into his car and went to work.
The END
Here is a link to the site if you wanted to try it and see how fast you can write non stop.
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