Today I am going to show you my 100 word writing. For writing our teacher told us to make a story and use vocabulary's. We are learning to use strong ideas when writing, eliminate unnecessary ideas and words, Only include what is powerful, meaningful and important.
I don't have 100 I have 106 because If I took some out it would't make sense I hope that's OK . Here it is.
My shoes were soaked and the rain wouldn’t stop. A grey car I didn’t recognize pulled up beside me I thought it was Exquisite.The Blustery rain was getting my clothes and face wet until I was soaked all over my body. I was so Disillusioned because I decided to walk. I was wet and cold and felt Fragile. When I realized the car stopped I stopped I looked. A nice lady stepped out of the car and asked if I wanted a ride. I got in.
The End
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