Hotspot Writing Term 4

Hi Readers,

Today I am going to be showing you my Hotspot writing. For this writing our teacher has showed us a website where you have to write for 5 minutes  and if you stop for too long it will say you failed. 
There are some sentences that My teacher have given me. They are highlighted.


W.A.L.T
Be fluent writer's and know what writing fluency feels like. 

Here is my writing...

As he opened the car door, there was a loud bang so he decided to go and look so see what was happening. When he got there he said “OH MY GOODNESS!! "Those people are breaking into the neighbours house”. He called the police. 10 minutes later the police arrived and went to look inside the man’s neighbours house. When the police finished they came outside. They told the man that the people have escaped out the back door. The man said “sorry I couldn't do anything about it”. He went inside his neighbours house and saw that everything was gone. He decided to go back into his house to see if they broke into his house luckily nothing was taken. After all that happened he got into his car and went to work.

The END

Here is a link to the site if you wanted to try it and see how fast you can write non stop.



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Back To School

Hello Everyone,

Today I am going to be talking about my first day of school. On Monday I didn't come to school. On Tuesday I came and I was so happy to see my friends. So when I got to school I saw my friends and I went to hug them. Tuesday was not bad for the first day for me. The next day we had athletics. I have made a blog post about athletics.  



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Athletics practice

Hi everyone,

Today I am gonna tell you what happen for athletics practice on Wednesday we had athletics . We had to go into our year levels. My friends and I   had to go into year 6 year girls line because we are year 6.

For athletics we had 6 stations it was long jump,shot put,long distant,high jump,sprinting and discus. The year 6 girls did discus, long distant and shot put. My favorite station was shot put cause we got to do it with miss Scott, Miss Scott is very appreciated in this school for all her work. 

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Water Safety DLO

Hello everyone,

Today I am going to be showing you my water safety DLO. This is what I have been doing this week. Here it is....

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Weekly word

Hey everyone,

Today I am going to show you my first weekly word for term 4. Today's word is Valued. Here it is.

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Math DLO

Malo e lelei everyone,

Today I am going to show you my math DLO That I did with my friend. We are learning to read and interpret a question and change fractions to decimals.

I have created a DLO about changing fractions to decimals. Here it is.

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100 word writing

Hey everyone,

Today I am going to show you my 100 word writing. For writing our teacher told us to make a story and use vocabulary's. We are learning to use strong ideas when writing, eliminate unnecessary ideas and words, Only include what is powerful, meaningful and important.

 I don't have 100 I have 106 because If I took some out it would't make sense I hope that's OK . Here it is. 

My shoes were soaked and the rain wouldn’t stop. A grey car I didn’t recognize pulled up beside me I thought it was Exquisite.The Blustery rain was getting my clothes and face wet until I was soaked all over my body. I was so Disillusioned because I decided to walk. I was wet and cold and felt Fragile.  When I realized the car stopped I stopped I looked. A nice lady stepped out of the car and asked if I wanted a ride. I got in.

The End

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