Today Me and my Best friend Christina has made a slide show abut our reading our activity is about Pluto. Here it is.
Thank you so much and please comment.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful- how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hey Finau,
ReplyDeleteThis is Anneleise from Hornby High school. I liked how you designed your google slide about Pluto and that I've learned some facts about Pluto that I haven't heard of before. I also liked how you have put a lot of effort into your facts and that you have made some little mistake on one of your slides, next time you should proof read your slides and fix up whats gone wrong. Anyways, everything else was great and keep up the good work. Which one of your Pluto facts is your favourite?