Today I am going to be showing you guys my narrative writing. There were 3 genres it was fantasy,action and Horror. I have chosen Horror. Here is my writing....
One bright morning, 3 triplets went for a walk in the forest because they all loved nature. On the walk they were hearing noises and they thought someone was following them so they walked faster and when they were almost out of the forest they saw an abandoned old looking mansion it was pitch black but they all decided to go inside to get help. Once they got inside the house, The door closed right behind them.
While they were in the house they went for an explore. 1 hour later, They heard someone open the front door and quickly hid. Once that person opened the door he instantly knew there were people inside his house. So he looked everywhere except the guest bedroom. 5 hours later, Their mum was worried about them because they have been gone for a really long time.
At 3 AM the girls woke up and heard weird noises so they went to look for what it was. When they went upstairs the stairs were creaking. By the time they got to the top the old creepy man was awake. The 3 triplets got scared and started crying.The creepy old man’s name was Eric. When Eric saw the girls he had a big creepy smile like he wanted to kill them.
Soon later the girls went up the attic and it looked like their eyes were about to pop out. What the girls saw was terrifying. The girls have seen lots of dead people being hung all around the attic. The old creepy man Eric woke up and walked into the attic and saw the girls and tried to kill them but the girls dodged him. Once they were out of the attic they ran for the door but it was locked and they didn’t know but Eric had a wife she was a nun she looked like an evil nun. The nun was staring at the girls while sitting on a rocking chair. She said “YOUR NOT GOING ANYWHERE” then she laughed.
The girl's mother was getting paranoid so she called the police but they wouldn’t send anyone to search for her daughters so the mother paid two private investigators to look for her girls. The next month the two investigators had some information and heard they went for a walk in the forest so they went into the forest and saw an abandoned old looking mansion and thought that the girls would be there so they got their guns prepared and then walked in and saw the 3 girls tied up and two old people sitting on there rocking chairs. After a minute staring at them they started shooting and then in a matter of seconds the two old creepy couple were dead. Then the 3 girls were free to go home. Once their mother saw them she started balling. Also They were frightened to sleep by themselves so their mother let them sleep with her.
THE END
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