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Friday, 6 September 2019

Personification Wrting

Malo E Lelei,

Today I am going to show you my writing. 

This week we have been learning about what personification is. The definition of Personification is an object that can act like a human and have a voice. Here is my writing


 The angry storm was making the cloud black and making it have lightning .The angry wind was blowing the snow  fast, making the snow swirl around. The ice brought me loneliness. The snow brought me excitement and happiness but also cold. The people were worried and scared.  The avalanche made a snow fall. The wind made trees fall. The snow was falling down and it made sharp edges.

Here is my ideas


  • Ice- loneliness
  • Snow- excitement - Happy, cold, 
  • Storm - 
  • People
  • Black clouds
  • Lightning
  • Wind
  •  Sharp edges- fear
  • Trees
  • Avalanche



Thank you so much hope you liked it, please comment and give me feed back.

Alu A !!!
( Bye!!!)

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