Hey everyone
Today I have a story I wrote it was about a plane crash. It is a picture prompt. My whole class did this as well but we each had to write our own writing about this. here's Mine.
The jungle plane crash
A little 5 year old girl named Chloe was going to Samoa with her dad Marcus because they have family there and they are half Samoan. so when they got on the plane they put their bags at the top. So on their way the engine was playing up so the flight attendance had to tell everyone that the engine wasn’t working and tell them to put their seat belt on. And they told the passengers that they were gonna land. But the engine was playing up even more so while the plane was going down people were screaming and Chloe was crying and hugging her dad. The plane was near the ground people started putting their masks on and holding each other. Once the plane crashed. People didn't survive even though they had the masks on. there were people there looking to see if anyone was alive, But they never saw Chloe and her dad they were still alive. So Chloe was screaming as loud as she can so they can hear her. Then they heard her so they helped to get her and her dad out. Once they were out Marcus was thanking the people who got them out. Marcus asked them where they are and they said that they are in Fiji. There were 5 people that helped Marcus and Chloe their names were Josh, Liam, Jacob, James and Robert they said they moved to Fiji 8 years ago and they used to live in California. Josh took Marcus and Chloe on a tour. While they were walking someones phone was ringing Josh said it sounded like it was coming from Marcus and then Marcus checked his pack bag and his phone was in there so he checked to see who called. It was his wife Melissa. He called her back and told her they had a crash but said they were okay Melissa said i’m calling the police to help yous. Melissa asked where they were he said in Fiji. So when another plane came they went to Samoa had a big feed.
The End
Thank you so much, please comment and give me some feed back for my next writing.Bye sorry this is late.
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