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Thursday 19 September 2019

My Hyperbole Poem

Kia ora everyone,

Today I have a Hyperbole poem to show you. My Hyperbole is about the 4 seasons. I also have some Hyperbole's I found on the internet. Here is my poem.





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Wednesday 18 September 2019

Hotspot writing

Aloha Everyone,

Today I'm gonna show you my Hotspot writing. It is about 3 astronaut going to Uranus. Here is a photo and writing.

 

Once upon a time there were these astronauts that went to Uranus. They decided one day they would go to Uranus so they went. Once they got there they heard some noises so they decided to take their guns out and they put on their strong suits and they put their helmets on. 

After putting on their clothes they went out. When they got out they stepped on the snow and ice their foot kinda went down. When they were walking, they heard something close so while they were walking their guns were pointing up just in case someone was there.

After 30 minutes of looking around  they couldn’t find anyone so they decided to lie down and relax. When they laid down they fell asleep. Once they woke up they looked around and one man was dead and all their guns were gone so they decided to find it. While they were walking, they heard a loud bang so they all ran to their rocket ship and blasted off.

The END

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Monday 16 September 2019

Weekly word: Enthusiastic

Hello everyone,

Today I am going to show you my weekly word.
Today's word is Enthusiastic. You might already know what Enthusiastic means. Here is My weekly word.




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Thursday 12 September 2019

Maths DLO

kia ora everyone 


Today I will me showing you my DLO.

For my DLO Miss D has given us math questions and we had to work them out and show how we worked it out. Here it is. 




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Monday 9 September 2019

Weekly word: Inspired

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Today I have another weekly word for you guys. Today's word is Inspired. Here it is




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Weekly word: Accepting

Kia ora,

Today I am gonna show you my weekly word.My weekly word for today  is Accepting.




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Friday 6 September 2019

SAVE THE HORNBY POOL!!

Malo E Lelei,

Today I am going to be showing you a google drawing I did with my best friends.We have made the google drawing to save the Hornby pool.



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Malo Aupito
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Personification Wrting

Malo E Lelei,

Today I am going to show you my writing. 

This week we have been learning about what personification is. The definition of Personification is an object that can act like a human and have a voice. Here is my writing


 The angry storm was making the cloud black and making it have lightning .The angry wind was blowing the snow  fast, making the snow swirl around. The ice brought me loneliness. The snow brought me excitement and happiness but also cold. The people were worried and scared.  The avalanche made a snow fall. The wind made trees fall. The snow was falling down and it made sharp edges.

Here is my ideas


  • Ice- loneliness
  • Snow- excitement - Happy, cold, 
  • Storm - 
  • People
  • Black clouds
  • Lightning
  • Wind
  •  Sharp edges- fear
  • Trees
  • Avalanche



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Alu A !!!
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