Today for reading we have been working on re-writing information in our own words Armistice day.
This is the paragraph I read about Armistice.
"At 11 am on 11 November this year, Aotearoa New Zealand marked the centenary of the armistice that ended the First World War in 1918. On that day 100 years ago, after four years of brutal conflict, war finally gave way to peace." - From https://ww100.govt.nz/armistice
This is the paragraph that I re-wrote in my own words
At 11 am on 11th November the people in Aotearoa decided to mark when their first world war ended in 1918 . The war went on for four years until they wanted to stop and make peace.
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