De-Extinction video

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Today I am going to be showing you my video that I made about De-Extinction. In my video there are fact about species (animals). Here it is. Sorry my video is not working but here is a photo and the link to my video.

My video

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Weekly word: Cheeky

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Today I am going to show you my weekly word. Today's word is cheeky you've probably already saw it in my title. Here it is.

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Topic: Dance

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Last week for Topic we have been looking at dance and picking dances that we like and what we want to try and learn. So we had to do some research. Here are 4 dance styles that I like and my poster.

Dance style: 1

Dance style: 2

Dance style: 3

Dance style: 4

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Writing Blog

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Today I am going to show my work. What we are learning to do for writing is changing a telling sentence into a showing sentence by turning (I) into a (the).  So we had a prompt, the prompt was like this picture of the sea, clouds and lightning. So any way I will be showing you my work. Here it is...  

Find five things related to the senses to describe in this image. Start each one with ‘The…’

1.The lightning can hurt people.

2. The lightning struck's the water and makes big waves.

3.The lightning struck's the power line and makes is sparks

4. The weird smell of some sort of burning smell made me dizzy.

5. The loud and terrifying sound of lightning made me really scared.

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Hotspot Writing: Show Not Tell

Malo E lelei,

Today I have been learning to show and describe and to not tell.

Miss D has put a short sentence and we have to make a paragraph or a sentence and show how the person is feeling without putting the word that the person is feeling so we have to describe the person and use different words to describe. Here is my table that I worked on.

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Weekly Word: Fragrance

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Today I did a weekly word and the word is Fragrance. Fragrance means something the smell nice. I actually knew what the word was but I still searched it to make sure. Here is my weekly word.

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Writing: Descriptive Narrative

 Malo E Lelei,

  Today I am going to tell you about my writing. we have been learning to write a descriptive narrative. 

  We have been learning to change telling to describing.We have been using the 6 senses witch are feel/Touch,see,smell,Hear,emotion. We have been changing I  to The in our sentence's. The sentence I changed I to the was. I was on a street near lots of shops and I changed it to the street was cold as I lay down and closed my eyes. The smell of hot bread wafted from the bakery.  

My narrative is about me being homeless, this is my writing. 

One cold dark night the street I slept on was really dark I couldn't see anything so I went to sleep. But then three men came and took my favorite necklace. I thought they wouldn't come back but they came back. They came back and they tried to kidnap me but I kept on kicking them. So they pulled out a knife and told me to be quiet.  


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