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Today I'm gonna show you my Hotspot writing. It is about 3 astronaut going to Uranus. Here is a photo and writing.
Once upon a time there were these astronauts that went to Uranus. They decided one day they would go to Uranus so they went. Once they got there they heard some noises so they decided to take their guns out and they put on their strong suits and they put their helmets on.
After putting on their clothes they went out. When they got out they stepped on the snow and ice their foot kinda went down. When they were walking, they heard something close so while they were walking their guns were pointing up just in case someone was there.
After 30 minutes of looking around they couldn’t find anyone so they decided to lie down and relax. When they laid down they fell asleep. Once they woke up they looked around and one man was dead and all their guns were gone so they decided to find it. While they were walking, they heard a loud bang so they all ran to their rocket ship and blasted off.
The END
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